... job, and sent my kids to school.
He (1) moved here,
(2) found a job, and
(3) sent my kids to school.
Two or more sentence can be compounded into one:
This is where I call home; this ... topic and something said about that topic, commonly referred to
as the subject and predicate.
SENTENCE = SUBJECT + PREDICATE
The subject and predicate are often described as a topic and a ... the reader's
understanding and acceptance of remarks. Inserts represent potential slots
authors can use to expand on, comment on, and/ or clarify their remarks.
And they use their knowledge...
... me:-
Improve Your English Speakingand English Pronunciation Skills
The first rule of speaking English is to speak clearly, concisely and use simple
vocabulary. KISS - keep it short and simple.
Remember ... out together for coffee and only
speak English to each other!
Read short stories out loud and try to see, say and hear the words to reinforce your
memory. Record yourself and play it back later, ...
times and dates) - you can also listen to or chat with other learners and native
speakers there. There are no more excuses.
!On the network:- Use the pronunciation pages to improve your understanding.
!On...
... student and need a laptop for my classes. If I
don’t have laptop I will take notes by my pen and that is really
slow and my handwriteing is really bad. But with my laptop my
notes is clear. This ... proficient language use?
I use only basic words and sentences, and I don’t use any idioms. Also,
there are many basic errors in word choice and verb tense. This
demonstrates a lack of proficient language ... cause -and- effect relationship. This
will demonstrate greater topic development (OPDUL=C).
2. Correct the spelling and grammar errors, and use idioms and more sentence
variety. This will demonstrate...
... delicious and cheap
C = friend will like this
Ti = However new delhi is very hot and very humid
C = friend will not like this
C = for those reasons friend will like some things and
not ...
Note: This test-taker has checked his first draft for coherence using
OPDUL=C
and has moved on to step #5.
G = my friend will like some things and not like some
things
... I’m a university student and I need a laptop for
my classes. If I didn’t have a laptop, I’d have to take notes by
hand, and that would be really slow. Also, my handwriting is
really bad, but...
... when I work at home,
I can look after them. This saves me money and time. Also, I
can see my children more often, and this makes us all very
happy. This is the best advantage of telecommuting, ... because they was having
this big sell. I bought so many things, such a handbag and
stuffs. I saved lots of money. Definately, you can save money
going to sells.
And you can meets lots of ... gas. Insurance and repairs also expensive tire too. That
means I have to spend less dollars on other things like the
food and the cloths this is a big disadvantage two so I am to
think about...
... countries. This is good because the
teachers at Shelton University can understand my situation in
America and teach me words and idioms I can use when
shopping or at the bank, like “credit” and “debit.” ... station to school. This is very
convenient. Best of all, I don’t have to drive my car and find a
parking place, which is always a pain.
Those, I believe, are the qualities of a good school, like ... of experience. This is good because they
explain things very well and I can learn fast.
Moreover, at Shelton University there is lots of great coarses. I
can take grammar or writing coarses....
... (hook) Some people think that we do not
need zoos while others think that
we do.
Personally speaking,
specific I think that we need zoos.
(opinion)
The writing raters will ... same. This
demonstrates topical unity. Yes
√ No _
b. Does this introduction demonstrate grammatical unity?
The transition, “Personally speaking, ” connects the hook and the opinion,
and ... delete the subject and verb in the second and third
predictors.
G Personally, I think that we need zoos
because
they are educational,
fun for families predictor (reasons)
and
protect endangered...
... saw two pandas
in the Washington DC zoo last year and they had a baby. If there were no
zoos, the pandas would disappear because we are taking their land away.
However, in a zoo the pandas are ...
specifically word choice and sentence variety. Yes
√ No _
Does this conclusion demonstrate coherence?
Because of proficient Organization, Progression, Development, Unity and
L
anguage Use, this conclusion ... I’m a university
student and I need a laptop for my classes. If I didn’t have a laptop, I’d
have to take notes by hand, and that would be really slow. Also, my
handwriting is really bad, but...
... more. Insurance and
repairs can also be expensive. Tires and parking too. As a result, I have to
budget my money and spend less on clothes and video games, and other
things I like. This is definitely ... blanking out because you are nervous. If this happens, you must
start writing. Remember
: Writing is thinking. The best way to start thinking
is to start writing about an example. When you start ... finish in six months and get a job. However, the day after he started
studying, the school suddenly closed and Hiroshi lost all his money. Now, he
has no school, no money and no job.
As you...
... your ability to integrate three skills: reading, listening
and writing objectively. First, you will read and summarize a reading passage.
Next, you will listen to and summarize a lecture on the ... process is called
P2P or peer-to-peer file sharing. Now think: Is sharing
something you love a crime? I don’t think so.
Finally, and this point I really want to stress: What I do in
the privacy ... computers. This is not
stealing music. Hardly. My friends and I are simply sharing
songs. In fact, I share music with people all over the world,
people I don’t know and will never meet. This process...
... computers. This is not
stealing music. Hardly. My friends and I are simply sharing
songs. In fact, I share music with people all over the world,
people I don’t know and will never meet. This process ... is called
P2P or peer-to-peer file sharing. Now think: Is sharing
something that you love a crime? I don’t think so.
I really want to stress this point: what I do in the privacy
of my home ...
Prompt Identify and generally describe the opinion (G) and
the supporting illustrations (3TiC) in the lecture and
show how they counter argue the opinion (G) and the
supporting illustrations...
... What’s better,
spending time and money getting from point A to point B and
feeling exhausted in the process—or simply picking up the
phone and using same-time email? The choice is obvious.
Teleconferencing ... lecturer believes that if you steal
music, you are a thief therefore you have no
privacy. The law is black and white. You can’t
have your cake and eat it too.
C = general = In conclusion, the ... crime. The court disagreed and fined Napster
for not paying.
TiC = specific = Finally, the author of the reading says that this
is a privacy issue. Record companies and the
government can’t...
...
A rising trend in education is online schools. Google “online schools”
and you will get thousands of hits with schools offering every type of
diploma and degree. But is an online education ... by kings and nobles who controlled the
land. By leaving the old in search of the new, Columbus symbolized
America’s determination to break free of Britain and King George the Third
and establish ... in the reading and in the lecture, make sure
that you identify and describe the cause -and- effect relationship in the opinions,
the body paragraphs and the conclusions. The cause -and- effect relationships...
... Asia and Oceania
and eat fruit and flowers which they locate by smell and with
their excellent eyesight. As they eat, seeds from the fruit fall to
the forest floor and new trees grow. This ...
y
Does this essay demonstrate organization?
This essay has a premise, a body and a conclusion. This demonstrates
block-style organization. Yes
√ No _
Does this essay demonstrate ... work during the day
and sleep at night. Those animals that are active at dawn and
dusk are said to be crepuscular. Beetles, skunks and rabbits
fall into this category. The third group are those...