... 25 0 -2 6 5). It has a sound structure, your position is clearly expressed, the information is well-organized, and structure-wise the sentences are fine. The vocabulary is impressive ... long (309 words instead of advised 25 0 -2 6 5). Otherwise this work is a very good one; it covers the task, your position is clear, the ideas are well-organized, expressed, explained and supported. ... essay is too long, 318 words instead of 25 0 -2 6 5. Otherwise (except for some minor grammatical errors) it is a very nice work. It covers the task, has the right structure,...